We are learning to expand our sentences by adding detail.
Oscar cried
When: At 8.50am yesterday
Where: At school
Why: He was being bullied by guy
At 8.50am yesterday at school Oscar cried because he was getting bullied by Guy.
They had an argument.
When: Yesterday afternoon
Where: at the mall
Why: because they both wanted to be the boss of the game.
Yesterday afternoon they had an argument at the mall because they both wanted to be the boss of the game.
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